Lessons i had learnt:
I had learnt how to use dominant impressions, precision writing, vivid supporting details(similie and metaphor in descriptive writing to bring life to compositions.
As I reached this place, I was welcomed by a gust of fresh air. As I took a deep breathe, the oxygen in the air diffused into my respiratory track, intoxicating all my body cells. A sudden confidence surged up my body as i feel rejuvenated instantly to overcome any endeavours in the future. I moved towards the sight of greenery that is producing this essential element ---Oxygen for all life forms. As hummingbirds and butterflies flutter around the leaves and flowers, i realise the importance of "co-existent between two communiities." When I reached out my tender hand to touch the evergreen leaves, the tiny droplets of dew on the the thin leaves surfaces let me realise that life is so fragile and we need to be constantly adaptable to our surroundings in order to thrive. A stone throw away, two muscular Malay delivery workers clad in blue tops and demin jeans, were busy loading brand new school textbooks and workbooks from lorries to trollies to be sent to the classroom for the bookshop auntie to sell them to students that are preparing for their next lap of education. Beads of perspiration flowed down their forehead onto their cheeks as they exerted a large force to move the load of textbooks. A soft constant"Pop"sound is produced when the books are piled up above one stack another. Before i leave this "oxygen-prroduction ground", I stick out my tongue to taste the air. I felt a sensational sweet feeling in my mind, because this is the time i could only get close to nature which makes me feel so relaxed and calm in this period.
***JIANDA***
Tuesday, November 4, 2008
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2 comments:
Is your place the small garden outside the 1A classroom (I forget which class)?
Very good description :D
Very vivid dscriptions. It must be the garden outside 1Aclassroom right???
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