Tuesday, November 4, 2008

Reflection:
I think this activity is very interesting. We know how to be precise in our writting. using metaphors, similes and personification in a very different way (playing of games). It is very fun, especially the part whereby we need to find the place described by the other classmates.

When I step into the room, a breeze of cool wind blew on to my face. I could hear almost nothing, except for the scribbling sound of pens and the flipping sound of paper, the students inside were as quiet as a church mouse, except for some occasional whispers. “Tick....Tock... Tick… Tock” the clock have been constantly making the sound indicating that each second is passing by. As i walk further in, I could see sturdy book shelves packed with books, with different genre just like my shoulders carrying multiple, heavy burdens. The students there were revising for their examination, looking for solutions to the answer like hardworking ants looking for food. I took in a long and deep breath trying to absorb all the knowledge from the wise old man's brain. Do you know where I am? :D

>.o! YunLi ! o.<

3 comments:

We are Born To ROCK!!!!!!! said...

Hehe, good writing!
"I took in a long and deep breath, trying to absorb all the knowledge from the wise old man's brain."
- That sounds evil! :D
Kelly(:

We are Born To ROCK!!!!!!! said...

The library!(Should be correct since I took your paper for the hunting that day!)

Meiyu.

We are Born To ROCK!!!!!!! said...

I like the part where you describe how quiet the place is. Good writting. (:
Ruifang