HEY!
As we approached the place, the sound of running water gushing down resembles the harmonious lullaby of the choir.
The sweet, refreshing smell of the leaves and the waterlogged soil brought back many precious, childhood memories.
A glance at the pool of water and little,pink styrofoam particles, which looked like fish food danced along to the beat of the ripples.
The clear-crstal water rushed down like the never-ending jokes we experienced during Miss Tang and Mr Kes's lessons.
I hope you have a slight impression of the place right now
As we move across the uneven and rough surface of the concrete pathway, it resembles the pathway to freedom of the working world. When i place my finger on the slimy, sticky algae surface it simply makes my finger go numb.
To End it All.!We all had fun i supossed, especially when we got to move around the school to find our classmate's locations.
BY ZHIYE:)
Tuesday, November 4, 2008
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2 comments:
Dude !!! Nice descriptions !!!
love the way you described your "Chosen Place". It was definitely good and better than mine. Good Job !!! I can see you have been improvng. Jiayou !
Joseph ~ brain still dead ~
Nice description!!
The place is "garden" ?
"The clear-crstal water rushed down like the never-ending jokes we experienced during Miss Tang and Mr Kes's lessons." Cool description but not universal? xD
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