Tuesday, November 4, 2008

Re:flection by KS

Trying to implement an element of fun into English was the right way to go, though the time management of such activities need to improve. Though this, it was creative to come up with such an idea, and I hope other lessons could have such an implementation.
What's a lesson without worksheets? Well, half a lesson.(makes little sense but hey...this is my post), but what is in the worksheet which can determine whether peiople would actually complete it? That's right, questions. Asking us on how to describe the place with our five sense was already challenging enough. Taste an area? Not exactly what we people do to find a location. The questions may be tough, but it certainly helped me to improve by having both vivid and exaggerated descriptions to locate an area which we knew of but not its location.
These activities should've helped a majority of the class to improve on their writing skills, and frankly I feel the same. Here's how my five senses(four alright?) brought about this summary:

Before you even step into the designated area, take a look around the alleyway leading into the area. A worker's rest corner comprising of a bench and pails will give you a cosy feel. Besides the alleyway, immature trees stand short yet healthy, reminding us how simple life can really be. Inside the room, a fresh blast of cold air greets you, which manipulates you to fall asleep. Before that, the smell of natural air fills your lungs, cleansing your sicken body after all that stress of O levels. As you enter the area, the wind very slowly erodes your skin, like mites biting your skin, yet it leaves you wanting more. Pillars supporting the shelter have pale-orange sides whioch feel like strange formations from the Moon, coarse but strange enough, it feels natural, like it was there even before the school was constructed. What causes a surge in coldness? Maybe your nemesis, but no, you twitch your ears a little, and soon enough you hear the sound of air conditioners conditioning the air. You hear the staff trying to get things oragnised, and the students like jet fighters, talking as fast and certainly as loud as one.

Yep, I guess that sums it up. Keep updating!

By Kang Shiong
Why so serious?

2 comments:

We are Born To ROCK!!!!!!! said...

Clement--Pulse studio?
Very good description...

We are Born To ROCK!!!!!!! said...

Seems like pulse studio to me. Very nice description! :D