Reflection by Benedict

I have learn't how to make my description of things more lively and how to implement the use of everyday's objects in my description. Throughout this programme, I have also learnt how to add feelings into my description and how to attract the reader to any article which I have written. This has allowed me to be able to describe the "atmosphere" of how the object is like hence attracting readers to what I have written as it allows them to have a clear image of how the object which I am describling is like. This is some examples of of my description of a place, the orange pillars greeted me as I walked into this place. They gave people a sense of security as they are strong and are like mighty statues showingthe accomplishments of the accopmplishments of the human civilisation. The sound of people's singing filled my mind with a sense of security as they are as pleasing to the ears as that of the breeze of the wind. The smell of ashes filled my nose, it was an awful feeling like how one would feel when he smells a dirty sock.