duqun's Reflection

As we approached the place,i saw people queuing for food and tables arranged in an orderly manner. A group if girls gathering at a corner munching tidbits while gossiping. i can hear the loud clashing of the cutlery. students are laughing hysterically like witches. the smell of the fried chicken wings stimulates my digestive enzymes. the sweet, refreshing taste of the cup of 'tiger' made by auntie margaret was simply rejuvenating me.

i guess you all know the place. O.o
too obvious:D

this descriptive and precisive writing not so bad?
i enjoyed a bit, but applying it seems pretty difficult.