The activity we did last week allowed us to have fun while learning more about preposition. It was not difficult to describe the five senses but using similes was surely an obstacle for us to overcome.
Our group - Joseph and me, got to go to the room which was filled with a foul smell. Upon reaching the place, we were greeted by the smell of the place. The place was rather clean, except for the fan that is completely covered with dust without any wind coming out of it. The place was filled with the groaning of boredom of the pipe system, like the yawning of bystanders watching people playing chess and the toilet has a taste of sadness of not being taken care of. Even though the place was clean, there were still dust present on the sink and seemed untidy as there were puddles of water all over the place.
Can anybody guess this place?
melvin
Tuesday, November 4, 2008
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4 comments:
It must have been a toilet!!!!
wei guang
Interesting descriptions, thinking of whether it is a girl's or guy's toilet
"... the toilet has a taste of sadness of not being taken care of"
Didn't you just mentioned it? :D
Rather good writing, keep it up!
Kelly!
HAHAHA!!! i agree with kelly. :D you already wrote out the place and still ask us to guess. But it's quite a good writing. HEE!!! :P
KaiXin
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